How English Language has changed overtime
It is no doubt that the use of slang and abbreviation is at its peak in the world of social media, so it comes as a surprise that phrases that were used most often by teens and adults are considered to be out dated by the younger generation. The acronym for 'laugh out load', 'LOL' which was once used by every generation has now been described by teens to 'have had its day' and are most likely to use 'haha' or a emoji representing laughing. In a recent survey 54% used 'haha' followed by 33.7% admitting they would use the laughing emoji.
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I feel i have expressed my views well with good facts to back up my ideas. The way i have got straight to the point without confusion i feel went well.
The improvements needed in this work, which would have been done with more time would be to use more formal and intelligent language so the audience for my article are drawn in an can see my point of view expressed fully.
Some good intergration of opinion and research. Be careful to notice the difference between blogging language and comment articles - actively read some articles to develop the journalistic voice you will need in the exam. You could redraft this as one of your independent tasks, aiming to make the language more journalistic; add a hook suitable for whoever you decide is your target audience and add in the other conventions of articles e.g. strapline, caption etc.
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